Lesson Critique Template
Subject: Math______________
Topic: Multiplication_________
Level: Primary 2____________
No  | Area of Focus | Comments/Feedback  | 
1  | Comment on the GOAL(S) of the lesson (with reference to the learners’ ability, level & profile): | Goals  of the lesson are not spelled out in the lesson. The learning abilities  of the students and desired learning outcomes of the lesson have to be  specified before the lesson commences. Furthermore, the learning  outcomes for each group of students (HA,MA,LA) should  be stated  clearly. while keeping in mind that the lesson’s goals drive the whole  lesson.  | 
2  | Comment  on the OBJECTIVE(S) of the lesson (with reference to the learning  outcomes that are observable and assessable, aligned with the goals?): | Since  the lesson’s goal is not even stated in the lesson plan, the objectives  are not focused. This can result in the teacher being unable to explain  clearly to the student. Furthermore,the teacher will be unable to  manage her time properly. Thus, the lesson objectives will still not be  met.  | 
3  | Comment on the INSTRUCTIONAL ACTIVITIES and use/choice of ICT TOOLs :
 c)  The suitability of the use/choice of ICT tools AND non-ICT tools to the activities planned.  | (a)  - Group work(group discussion) The  pupils are grouped according to their abilities and this can facilitate  learning as  pupils are given the opportunity to learn at their  comfortable pace. For the second group work activity, the teacher  suggested that the HA group will create a story and present their  answers in various multiplication representations. However, a story may  not be appropriate as the pupils may lose the focus on multiplication.  Instead, the pupils can create a question instead, with guidelines  provided. This way, it is clearer to see if the pupils have understood  the concepts to be taught. - Presentation of PowerPoint slides - Sing along session The activity helps to arouse interests in students as a tuning-in activity. (b)  It’s good that the teacher include student-centred activities such as  group work. However, the teacher should assign roles for the pupils to  keep them on task. Example: Having additional instructional strategies  like “Think-Pair-Share” to facilitate active learning in the form of  collaboration. The  teacher should give more examples during the directed activities rather  then only indicate grouping in fours. She should scaffold for the  students and at the same time, the students should be given  opportunities to learn independently and henceforth, enabling the  learning to shift from teacher-centered to student-centered. This would  create the environment  for self-directed learning.ya that c.  For the lesson, the teacher’s use of Powerpoint is sufficient enough  for bringing across the intended concept. The use of the mini  whiteboards for individual students allow them to work on their own  towards understanding what was just taught. However, the teacher could  get each student to show how they have applied the lesson concept to the  work so that even students from different ability groups are able to  learn different methods of applying the concept.  | 
No  | Area of Focus | Comments/Feedback  | 
4  | Comment on the IMPLEMENTATION PROCESS (what could have gone well or wrong; some suggestions for improvement) | It  should be reminded that these are Primary 2 students afterall and so  they might get too involved in the game and so the teacher might have  some problems in getting their attention back. Thus, the teacher must  set clear time limits and rules before the lesson. A timer that rings   could be used for this purpose.  Using  the “odd one out” concept with students acting as little teachers may  result in them not really understanding the concepts that are meant to  be taught. Perhaps, even to the extent of the students becoming less  interested in picking up the lesson goals.  | 
5  | Comment on ASSESSMENT  (Focus on the appropriateness to the goals and objectives) | While  the teacher has mentioned that worksheets will be used for assessment,  she has not mentioned if the worksheet contains questions that test on  pupil’s understanding of the concept of multiplication, or if the  questions simply test on the multiplication table.  | 
Suggest how you would improve the lesson plan:
1) Identify the goals: Students will learn to understand the concept of multiplication based on grouping. They will also learn that multiplication is derived from repeated addition.
OR
Students will learn the concept of multiplication based on grouping.
Students will learn about multiplication using repeated addition.
2) Implementation:
- Rules and time limit should be clearly stated before the lesson begins
- A digital timer could be used
- Students need to be briefed before the start of the activity on what would the activity be about and what to expect. Students should not feel lost even before the start of the activity. This is especially true as they are Primary 2 students.
3) The teacher mentioned in her lesson plan “Teacher will then call out, “Get in fives’. Pupils will quickly group themselves in fours.” This error may mislead any other person who tries to conduct the lesson using this lesson plan given. Hence, it is important that the teacher edit her work carefully.